Deadly Temptation

Deadly Temptation by Linette King
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

A young woman with a seemingly dark past marries up and is estranged from her family. She is caught by one of her in-laws with her lover. From this point, the drama ensues. The story was flowing well and the characters, while not developed, were somewhat interesting. However, after the reveal of Jazmyne' s past and her husband's outburst, the story loses control. The epilogue has an odd entry about a yoni steam that fits nowhere and so the end came across as odd. Yes, it is hard to fully develop a short story, but I like for them to still make sense. This odd ending and minor errors make this an okay, quick read with missed potential.

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